I don't see anything wrong with your zone file.
1) Does IP address 192.168.1.253 exist?
2) Does /etc/resolv.conf point to 192.168.1.253?
3) Do all hosts on your network point to 192.168.1.253 for DNS resolution?
4) Is apache started?
5) Use "dig" instead of nslookup to test DNS server
Code:
dig @192.168.1.253 faizalita.org ns
If you can ping by IP address, then check resolv.conf. If you are unable to ping by ip address, then check ifconfig and firewall settings.
BTW: Your use of the term sub-domain is incorrect. A sub-domain would have a delegation record (ns records) added to the faizalita.org zone that point to dnstest.faizalita.org -and- your named.conf file would load the zone dnstest.faizalita.org in addition to faizalita.org. In your example, all you have done is created an address record within the faizalita.org domain. ie dnstest.faizalita.org, not something like
www.dnstest.faizalita.org Which, for the purpose of your test is fine.