need to know the following items:
drives/partition layout filesystems flags
The contents of the efi partition
the following in your installed kali system on your internal drive
The contents of /etc/fstab
the contents of /usr/lib/grub/
The contents of /boot and /boot/grub
when you boot into the kali live
does /sys/firmware/efi exist and if so the ouput of
efibootmgr -v