Peer Feedback Requested on Video Tutorial
 

Good day LQ Users!

A few months ago I made a video tutorial on how to configure a basic Apache Virtual Host on Debian-based Linux. For the most part, the video has done pretty well and what little feedback I've received on YouTube has been positive.

But I want to put it to a more critical crowd to get better feedback. I'm planning on releasing another video on Apache with two differences: (A) configuration under Fedora and (B) configuring SSL. But I don't want to move forward with this untill I know what I've done so far is solid enough that I can move forward with it.

So what I'm asking is if you could leave feedback and let me know what you think. Is the information delivered sound? Is it delivered in an efficient way (annotations aside)? Did I miss something important from within the scope of the tutorial?

Thanks in advance!

Link to the tutorial

The background noise is obnoxious; apart from that it looks OK.