I wrote the article myself. Sorry for my poor English and 'biased propaganda'. Feel free to share any opinion of yours about the article and Linux Deepin. You can also send PM to me to discuss about issues regarding to writing for the Linux Deepin Plannet.

I read your article and I thought it was good.

In fact, it brought my attention to a higher level and if I had the opportunity I'd try Linux Deepin.

You said" The Deepin application series will no longer be separate parts but rather an integrated and interconnected ensemble, which provides better interactive experience."

You should and this is just my opinion; give additional descriptive detailed sentences to support that and explain just a little more.

I think (if this is your first article) being a first time Editor; you have done an amazing job!

Thank you very much for your encouragement. I will try to do it better.

You are welcome.

BTW you don't have to try to do it better you already have what it takes; just add a little more detail.

Good luck!