I read your article and I thought it was good.
In fact, it brought my attention to a higher level and if I had the opportunity I'd try Linux Deepin.
You said" The Deepin application series will no longer be separate parts but rather an integrated and interconnected ensemble, which provides better interactive experience."
You should and this is just my opinion; give additional descriptive detailed sentences to support that and explain just a little more.
I think (if this is your first article) being a first time Editor; you have done an amazing job!