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I'M trying to build an LFS system from the linux from scratch project. I'M stuck on the following page:
http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/...r06/glibc.html

I've got the commands placed into a script so I can check to see what went wrong and where fore I get to far ahead and figure out I massed up 30 steps back. Each script is set to create a file by date > ../FLAG then echo GOOD so I know everything went okay. But I've hit a dead end because I'M not getting the FLAG file or seeing GOOD upon completion of the script running and I can't find the problem.

DL=$(readelf -l /bin/sh | sed -n 's@.*interpret.*/tools$.*$]$@\1@p') &&
sed -i "s|libs -o|libs -L/usr/lib -Wl,-dynamic-linker=$DL -o|" \
scripts/test-installation.pl &&
unset DL &&
sed -i -e 's/"db1"/& \&\& $name ne "nss_test1"/' scripts/test-installation.pl &&
sed -i 's|@BASH@|/bin/bash|' elf/ldd.bash.in &&
( patch -Np1 -i ../../../glibc-2.14.1-fixes-1.patch 2>&1 | tee patch-one.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
( patch -Np1 -i ../../../glibc-2.14.1-sort-1.patch 2>&1 | tee patch-two.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
( patch -Np1 -i ../../../glibc-2.14.1-gcc_fix-1.patch 2>&1 | tee patch-tree.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
sed -i '195,213 s/PRIVATE_FUTEX/FUTEX_CLOCK_REALTIME/' \
nptl/sysdeps/unix/sysv/linux/x86_64/pthread_rwlock_timed{rd,wr}lock.S &&
mkdir -v ../glibc-build &&
cd ../glibc-build &&
case `uname -m` in
i?86) echo "CFLAGS += -march=i486 -mtune=native -O3 -pipe" > configparms ;;
esac &&
( ../glibc-2.14.1/configure --prefix=/usr \
--disable-profile --enable-add-ons \
--enable-kernel=2.6.25 --libexecdir=/usr/lib/glibc 2>&1 | tee configure-glibc.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
( make 2>&1 | tee make-glibc.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
cp -v ../glibc-2.14.1/iconvdata/gconv-modules iconvdata &&
make -k check 2>&1 | tee glibc-check-log &&
grep Error glibc-check-log &&
touch /etc/ld.so.conf &&
( make install 2>&1 | tee make-install.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
cp -v ../glibc-2.14.1/sunrpc/rpc/*.h /usr/include/rpc &&
cp -v ../glibc-2.14.1/sunrpc/rpcsvc/*.h /usr/include/rpcsvc &&
cp -v ../glibc-2.14.1/nis/rpcsvc/*.h /usr/include/rpcsvc &&
mkdir -pv /usr/lib/locale &&
localedef -i cs_CZ -f UTF-8 cs_CZ.UTF-8 &&
localedef -i de_DE -f ISO-8859-1 de_DE &&
localedef -i de_DE@euro -f ISO-8859-15 de_DE@euro &&
localedef -i de_DE -f UTF-8 de_DE.UTF-8 &&
localedef -i en_HK -f ISO-8859-1 en_HK &&
localedef -i en_PH -f ISO-8859-1 en_PH &&
localedef -i en_US -f ISO-8859-1 en_US &&
localedef -i en_US -f UTF-8 en_US.UTF-8 &&
localedef -i es_MX -f ISO-8859-1 es_MX &&
localedef -i fa_IR -f UTF-8 fa_IR &&
localedef -i fr_FR -f ISO-8859-1 fr_FR &&
localedef -i fr_FR@euro -f ISO-8859-15 fr_FR@euro &&
localedef -i fr_FR -f UTF-8 fr_FR.UTF-8 &&
localedef -i it_IT -f ISO-8859-1 it_IT &&
localedef -i ja_JP -f EUC-JP ja_JP &&
localedef -i tr_TR -f UTF-8 tr_TR.UTF-8 &&
localedef -i zh_CN -f GB18030 zh_CN.GB18030 &&
( make localedata/install-locales 2>&1 | tee make-localdata.log && exit $PIPESTATUS ) &&
cat > /etc/nsswitch.conf << "EOF"
# Begin /etc/nsswitch.conf
passwd: files
group: files
shadow: files
hosts: files dns
networks: files
protocols: files
services: files
ethers: files
rpc: files
# End /etc/nsswitch.conf
EOF &&
tzselect &&
cp -v --remove-destination /usr/share/zoneinfo/Eastern \
/etc/localtime &&
cat > /etc/ld.so.conf << "EOF"
# Begin /etc/ld.so.conf
/usr/local/lib
/opt/lib
EOF &&
cat >> /etc/ld.so.conf << "EOF"
# Add an include directory
include /etc/ld.so.conf.d/*.conf
EOF &&
mkdir /etc/ld.so.conf.d &&
date > ../FLAG &&
echo GOOD