From the picture I see 2 things:
1. The editor you have open has word wrap on and hence why the lines of the original text are over multiple lines
2. In addition to the above, the copy to text has placed a newline at the end of each line
Your original solution to remove the '\n' (newline) is the correct idea, but unfortunately there does not seem to be any defining feature to tell it when to stop doing this.
I noticed the original text has an indent at the start of a new paragraph, but these appear to have been removed as well
Maybe if you used a converter instead of copying you might be left with something that can be altered easier??