- pronounciation of Mandriva
this is personal preferance anyway.. and its already too late to change right?
- swap partition. they are _not_ required, but recommended. i think you say to specify 512mb of swap space.. i dont remember what the ratio is, but im pretty sure its supposed to be either half or equal to the amount of ram you have, rather than just "512mb" always.
- root password.. you should reinforce the fact that you should _always_ have a root password... even if they will be annoyed with having to always enter the password.
hmm.. not much else to comment on. i only posted these few comments because you wanted a lil feedback. i wouldnt have said any of the above or probably thought about them if you didnt ask.