This looks good.
Only two comments:
- /var2: Fedora includes /srv, in line with the FHS, which may be used as an alternate location (the FHS is a bit unclear). The default SELinux policy confines many of the standard services to their "normal" directories, e.g. Apache HTTPD to /var/www/, so that needs to be taken into account if you opt to use other directories for these services.
- "Appendix I: Misteaks" ? It made me smile, but humour is often misinterpreted (particularly by non-native speakers). It very much depends on your audience...
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